Recount Writing, Stephen

A Trip to the MOTAT

On Wednesday the 13th of May the students from Room 9,10 and 7 went by bus to the Motat to learn about the things that soldiers used in world war one.

When we arrived at the  Motat, an educator welcomed us. Then we had morning tea. After  that the  educator took us to see the types of things that the soldiers used in wars. We saw morse codes and messenger pigeons, Fuller Phone, a Heliographs and a semaphone.

Then we went on the tram ride and the driver told us some things about the trams and how they worked. After we had our tram ride, our parent helper took us  on a guided tour to  where we wanted to go. Then  we went to the activity room and  the earthquake cafe. It was funny because someone fell of the earthquake cafe.

After that Moses  thanked the educator and Katherine.Finally we were on the bus  for the journey back to school. I really enjoyed the trip and learned a lot about the wars.

By Stephen

Article Review, Stephen

WALT: write a review of the article I have read.

Title	Smokefree.
Author	Feana Tu’akoi.
Characters	Mum and her son.
Setting	This story takes place in the home of the characters.
Problem	Mum could not stop smoking.
Complication to the problem	Mum could not give up smoking even though she tried many different routines.
How the problem was solved?	The problem was solved when mum rang the helpline for help and they advised her what to do to give up smoking.
How did I feel about it.	I felt happy that mum stopped smoking and tried different routines to give up smoking.

By Stephen